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poetry that helped hus through our hardest and darkest times
June 12, 2004
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theres a thread like this on support thread but id thought id make one here, poetry is an expression of feelings thoughts emotions and our own outlook on life. i like to write poetry and would like to veiw others poems, heres one of mine to get us started !

tidal wave of tears

all my hopes and all my dreams
washed away, or so it seems
anger, sadness, deepening madness
under tidal waves of tears

dreams of you and smiles that gleam
washed away, or so it seems
thoughts of death and boiling hate
ride in a tidal wave of tears

all my hopes and all my dreams
washed away or so it seems
anger, sadness, deepening madness
under tidal waves of tears

now someone else has to post a poem 🙂

June 15, 2004
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Hey that was really cool. I have one:

When I look into your eyes
One world becomes two
I'm in a peaceful, hidden meadow
with nature, birds, and you.
a brook flows softly by
there's a whisper in the trees
As you gently take my hand
there's a rustle in the leaves

a mother and her newborn fawn
turn and look our way
nuzzle, then, continue on
together, unafraid

so it's you I seek in times of strife
or when the sun forgets to rise
becasue the worst of storms within me calms
when I look into your eyes

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June 15, 2004
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WEll that's tough reading. Me thinks one shalt double space to accentuate the lines.

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June 15, 2004
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wow free, that is really really good ! but i dnt like the way this board takes out the empty lines but that aint our fault !, i think you have talent 🙂

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